Chapter 4: Painted Faces and Long Hair
Perspective: Piggy
Cross the Line and You’ll see what Happens
THAT JACK MERRIDEW COMPLETELY CROSSED THE LINE!!!! HE BROKE MY SPECS. I didn’t do anything to him! Ugh, why does he have be so rude! He’s always in a belligerence mood! He’s never nice to me ever! He’s gonna see…. just you wait Jack Merridew!
You know now I’ll never be able to see, I only got one eye! Jack Merridew…he’s a gonna pay! I need to think of something! He’s such a blatant I tell yah’! Noisy lil' thing. Never nice…! Hmmm….maybe I can put crabs in his pants…or…I can throw rocks at his stupid little head. Uhhh……I don’t know!
Maybe Simon can help me…yah! He’s the only one who nice to me anyways…he gave me meat when Jack didn’t. That was nice of Simon. Yah, we can mean to Jack…but that isn’t gonna work! Or maybe we can pour masses of gouts on him! I don’t know!
I can’t believe Ralph. All he said to Jack was “That was a very dirty trick.” If I were Ralph I would have made him go to a time our or somethin’! Please, Ralph, do SOMETHING! YOU KNOW HE’S THE WROST LEADER EVER! HE ALWAYS DEPENS ON EVERYONE TO DO SOMETHN’ FOR HIM! LIKE HE MADE ME ASK EVERYONE THERE NAMES!! DO IT YOUR SELF, RALPH! HIM AND JACK ARE SO…IMPALPABLE….THEY’LL NEVER UNDERSTAND HOW THEY FEEL ABOUT THEMSELVES!
I’m gonna try and think of somethin’ so bad, it’s a gonna hurt Jack and Ralph…just wait…!!! Hope’ Simon will and can help me. I wonder if he feels the same way I do about Jack n’ Ralph. Hope’ e’ does. I’m gonna give them malevolent looks all day! Just you wait Jack.........Ralph.
1 comment:
Again, great emotion. I really feel the anger of the character and the lust he feels about the situation. I liked that you gave the character's thoughts about the future as well. Good summarization of events too.
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