Tuesday, September 16, 2008

Lord Of The Flies (Post 3)

Lord Of The Flies




Chapter 3: Huts on the Beach
Perceptive: Simon

Why be so rude?

Ugh. I really can’t believe Ralph and Jack. Especially Jack. Just shut up about the dang pig already! I really wanted to shut his face off. I would never do something like that, but Jack is…different. When people get me annoyed or mad…well they just make me mad. Shut up Jack! He always has a rapt feeling on. Never calm, always always tense.

Him and Ralph were just basically saying crap. It seemed like Jack was saying I do nothing. Thankfully, Ralph was defending me…. well not in a good way. So that’s why I left them. To prove to them, I could get food and help everyone live. I really made a big compulsion to find this food. At least the litteluns followed me. They at least helped me find the fruit and bring it back. But…I don’t em’ suckers. They must of eaten all of em’. Whatever. Their younger, so they should eat more. I’m never hungry…. but that’s just me. I wonder if em’ older boys and Piggy will want some food.

Poor Piggy. I feel for him. I want people to listen to him when he’s talking. Jack needs to shut up. That’s really rude to call him Fatty. I want Jack to put a contrite face on for Piggy. Piggy don’ deserve all this crap.

Jack is very inscrutable. At first he seemed, nice but now he’s a greedy little boy who is mean. UGH. I JUST WANT TO HURT HIM SO BADLY ESPECIALLY AFTER WHAT HE SAID ABOUT ME. I DO TO HELP OUT. HE’S THE ONE WHO NEVER HELPS WITH ANYTHING. HE’S THE ONE WHO STARTED THIS FIRE AND ONLY HUNTS AND FIGHTS WITH PEOPLE. He’s the vicissitude in this group. And I want him to be nice. What I hope is that he doesn’t go mad for power. That would be bad.

3 comments:

Ms Collene said...

BEAUTIFUL! I am so impressed with your descriptions and interpretations of the characters feelings are awesome! On your next one make sure to bold your vocabulary words.

Looks Good Silvia!

Ms Collene said...

and forget what I said about bold because you're obviously one step ahead of me!

Wade *-* said...

I loved he way you expressed how upset Simon was with all the other boys!! You showed good emotion and I felt like I was the one Simon was complaining to! I really felt like I was in the situation Simon was. Really awesome job.



-Wade